Hi Grace, well done for writing such a persuasive letter. The structure of the letter is good and I like that you have begun with facts and then used the readers emotions to get them to help. Great use of extra description (‘thread bare’ to help the reader really imagine how hard life is for the person writing the letter. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.
Hi Grace, well done for writing such a persuasive letter. The structure of the letter is good and I like that you have begun with facts and then used the readers emotions to get them to help. Great use of extra description (‘thread bare’ to help the reader really imagine how hard life is for the person writing the letter. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.