hahaha what a joke, I like your use of setting the scene at the beginning, but you missed out a few words by accident.
Wow Eusebi what a build it. The tension is almost tangable. The mystery is great. Where did you get the idea? Why did you finish it so quickly?
Awesome! Eusebi I really liked the ending. But to improve you could do a little bit more of the people died.
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hahaha what a joke, I like your use of setting the scene at the beginning, but you missed out a few words by accident.
Wow Eusebi what a build it. The tension is almost tangable. The mystery is great. Where did you get the idea? Why did you finish it so quickly?
Awesome! Eusebi I really liked the ending. But to improve you could do a little bit more of the people died.