Where can I get these hats? I really need one now! Very persuasive writing, you have used some really appealing adjectives and some convincing statistics and numbers to win me round. One thing you could add would be an intriguing question, something like “have you ever found your head feeling cold on a wintery day..?”.
Hi Alisa,
Where can I get these hats? I really need one now! Very persuasive writing, you have used some really appealing adjectives and some convincing statistics and numbers to win me round. One thing you could add would be an intriguing question, something like “have you ever found your head feeling cold on a wintery day..?”.
Keep on persuading!
Oliver Quinlan
Lecturer, Plymouth University, UK