Hi Ella
I liked your idea to have a persuasive languge in poem form.The last sentance of the last verse had alrady been said and the 3rd verse last sentence didn’t make sence but oh well.I LOVED IT!Was there anything that you were directing it at????
wow! Ella
You’ve made my eyes sweat(I dont cry).
You’ve done an excelent peice of persuasive writing. Pat on the back! Good use of commas. Member not to press to hard on the keys because I see a bit of an mistake.
Well done!
And keeping bringing us some of your poems
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Lauren. Your cousin(Just in case you dont know) Bye
Hi Ella
I liked your idea to have a persuasive languge in poem form.The last sentance of the last verse had alrady been said and the 3rd verse last sentence didn’t make sence but oh well.I LOVED IT!Was there anything that you were directing it at????
wow! Ella
You’ve made my eyes sweat(I dont cry).
You’ve done an excelent peice of persuasive writing. Pat on the back! Good use of commas. Member not to press to hard on the keys because I see a bit of an mistake.
Well done!
And keeping bringing us some of your poems
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Lauren. Your cousin(Just in case you dont know) Bye
Hi Ella,
that was really great not so many phonics next time, but but apart from that I really liked it!
P.S and how it was based on our water topic
Elena!!!