Nice work Merle
I love the persuasive power you blasted across when you wrote thisI really liked the bit where you said “no one likes normal bayby boys they like happy baybiy boys” it made me grin!!
You were so great I did not understand why you would want to sell him!!!!
Do you really want to sell your brother?
Hi Merly, your brother must be really adorable, you almost bought me over. The picture you used also gave such warm effect.
All these coupled with the fact that I have four girls and no boy; I was considering the wonderful effect your lovely bother would have had in my home.
This is indeed persuasive. Keep it up!
Hi Merle (y)
That was really good considering you had to change it about 11 times , and although you were told to make it nice
you added in that cheekiness of your brother wearing tiaras and playing with barbie dolls that reaaally made me laugh.
Why chose a picture of a baby when he is older?
P.S Liverpool are still better then arsenal (yes without a capital)
Hi Isobel,
I agree that liverpool (no capital) is better than arsenal (no capital) but Tottenham Hotspur (with capitals and also known as Spurs) is better than both of you put together!
True!
Dear Isobel, I think the reason this is really good is because Merley was asked to really step up and improve it. I would agree that Merley gave a fantastic picture of her ‘imaginative’ brother. Its amazing what editing can do!
Nice work Merle
I love the persuasive power you blasted across when you wrote thisI really liked the bit where you said “no one likes normal bayby boys they like happy baybiy boys” it made me grin!!
You were so great I did not understand why you would want to sell him!!!!
Do you really want to sell your brother?
Hi Merly, your brother must be really adorable, you almost bought me over. The picture you used also gave such warm effect.
All these coupled with the fact that I have four girls and no boy; I was considering the wonderful effect your lovely bother would have had in my home.
This is indeed persuasive. Keep it up!
Hi Merle (y)
That was really good considering you had to change it about 11 times , and although you were told to make it nice
you added in that cheekiness of your brother wearing tiaras and playing with barbie dolls that reaaally made me laugh.
Why chose a picture of a baby when he is older?
P.S Liverpool are still better then arsenal (yes without a capital)
Hi Isobel,
I agree that liverpool (no capital) is better than arsenal (no capital) but Tottenham Hotspur (with capitals and also known as Spurs) is better than both of you put together!
True!
Dear Isobel, I think the reason this is really good is because Merley was asked to really step up and improve it. I would agree that Merley gave a fantastic picture of her ‘imaginative’ brother. Its amazing what editing can do!