lauryn pet

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6 Responses to lauryn pet

  1. Mrs Hedley says:

    Your poem made me a laugh! A pet that does not wee sounds like a dream come true.

  2. EMMA! says:

    your wrighting is really good you put the capital letters in the right palce well done

  3. Mia Z says:

    It was a very funny poem but all living animals wee so it is impossible for your pet to not wee!
    Apart from that I thought it was very funny and had good ryming sentences! 🙂

  4. Sophie K says:

    I like your poem you put capitals in the right place witch is good .
    I enjoyed your little poem about your pet I liked it lots.
    Sophie K

  5. yenji says:

    its a very quite and I liked how it rimed

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