Baboon

Posted on May 29, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Baboon

  1. Thomas says:
    June 11, 2012 at 9:36 am

    Hi Lauren,

    I really liked your good ryming and description of the Baboon. Also the end paragraph was good but you could of made it longer.

  2. Sophie K says:
    June 12, 2012 at 4:20 pm

    It rhymed which was good, and it was very imaginative. I liked it.
    Sophie K

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