Hello Liam,
I felt like I really understood what you were trying to get across in this blog and it has really motivated me to try and donate to charity. Well done for successfully completing you task! Maybe next time you can try and make it longer. Keep up the good work and carry on blogging.
In the second paragraph 2 lines Down you typed give mony I am not sure if you ment to type mony
but if you weren’t then I think it should be money( if you ment to say money),
but despite that I thought it was realy convincing .
Hello Liam,
I felt like I really understood what you were trying to get across in this blog and it has really motivated me to try and donate to charity. Well done for successfully completing you task! Maybe next time you can try and make it longer. Keep up the good work and carry on blogging.
In the second paragraph 2 lines Down you typed give mony I am not sure if you ment to type mony
but if you weren’t then I think it should be money( if you ment to say money),
but despite that I thought it was realy convincing .
Sophie K