I like the persuasive description and the use of the images to persuade. I think that the red background is really hard to read, especially for an old person like me. I also did not really understand why Liverpool were better than Arsenal, what are the facts that make them better?
Hello Isobel,
I really enjoyed this persuasive piece of writing even though I am an Arsenal supporter. This is because you gave one thorough reason why people should support Liverpool football team. Although I liked this, there is no way I am changing to Liverpool. Sorry. Maybe in your next blog you can make it a bit easier to read as the background gave a very light effect.
Hi Isobel, you have used lots of persuasive writing, but I’m afraid that you’ve got some of your facts wrong. The title should be “Vote For Tottenham!”And instead of “don’t vote for Tottenham,” shouldn’t it be “don’t vote for any team apart from Tottenham.” Apart from that, I thought it was great.
Hello Isobel again,
I have one thing to add. There is one small mistake. Your choice of team. You know it should really say ‘Arsenal rules’ or ‘ Vote for Arsenal’. Keep up the good work and remember in your next piece of writing to get the topic correct.
Hi Isobel,
I’d just like to remind you that Arsenal finished 5 spaces above Liverpool, Tottenham- 4. Also Keeny Dalglish got sacked. Apart from the errors in the choice of team I though that if you added some facts to explain why Liverpool are a best tem in the Premier league it would be a good peice of persuasive writing. And where do you vote? I would like to know so I could vote for Arsenal…
Like Jake you are so silly! Arsenal came 3rd space in the Premiur leauge!!!!!!!!
Kenny Daglish got sacked and now their is only 3 liverpool supporters still alive!
EVERYONE WHO READS MY COMMENT VOTE FOR ARSENAL!!!
Welldone Isobel I thought your writing was good but instead of boring liverpool you should have talked aout brilliant arsenal!
I like the persuasive description and the use of the images to persuade. I think that the red background is really hard to read, especially for an old person like me. I also did not really understand why Liverpool were better than Arsenal, what are the facts that make them better?
Hello Isobel,
I really enjoyed this persuasive piece of writing even though I am an Arsenal supporter. This is because you gave one thorough reason why people should support Liverpool football team. Although I liked this, there is no way I am changing to Liverpool. Sorry. Maybe in your next blog you can make it a bit easier to read as the background gave a very light effect.
Hi Isobel, you have used lots of persuasive writing, but I’m afraid that you’ve got some of your facts wrong. The title should be “Vote For Tottenham!”And instead of “don’t vote for Tottenham,” shouldn’t it be “don’t vote for any team apart from Tottenham.” Apart from that, I thought it was great.
Hello Isobel again,
I have one thing to add. There is one small mistake. Your choice of team. You know it should really say ‘Arsenal rules’ or ‘ Vote for Arsenal’. Keep up the good work and remember in your next piece of writing to get the topic correct.
Sorry Rafi, now you’re getting confused too. The topic is all about how amazing Spurs is!
Hi Isobel,
I’d just like to remind you that Arsenal finished 5 spaces above Liverpool, Tottenham- 4. Also Keeny Dalglish got sacked. Apart from the errors in the choice of team I though that if you added some facts to explain why Liverpool are a best tem in the Premier league it would be a good peice of persuasive writing. And where do you vote? I would like to know so I could vote for Arsenal…
Hello bad supporter isobel!
Like Jake you are so silly! Arsenal came 3rd space in the Premiur leauge!!!!!!!!
Kenny Daglish got sacked and now their is only 3 liverpool supporters still alive!
EVERYONE WHO READS MY COMMENT VOTE FOR ARSENAL!!!
Welldone Isobel I thought your writing was good but instead of boring liverpool you should have talked aout brilliant arsenal!
COME ON YOU AAAAAAAAAAAAAAMAZING ARSENAL
Your amazing arsenal supporter friend MERLEY!!!!