My hamster

Posted on May 30, 2012 by Deleted User
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7 Responses to My hamster

  1. Mrs Hedley says:
    May 31, 2012 at 9:38 am

    I like the way you made the poem rhyme. Well done, Isabella!

  2. angelina says:
    June 2, 2012 at 9:36 am

    well done

  3. lauryn says:
    June 2, 2012 at 6:05 pm

    I like your ryming words.

  4. lauren (y4M) says:
    June 5, 2012 at 12:18 pm

    Very good
    Great ryming
    I liked it how you made it rhyme and you picked something that most people dont write about
    really Superdabyousious

  5. Oliver says:
    June 11, 2012 at 9:28 am

    Hi Isabella
    I like your ryming.
    Remember a fullstop at the end.

  6. lauryn says:
    June 12, 2012 at 1:59 pm

    I like your ryming words but you missed out
    the full stop at the end

  7. Sophie K says:
    June 12, 2012 at 4:44 pm

    I agree with lauren
    (good rhyming and you wrote something that not many people would usually write about),
    Even though lauyrn also wrote about her hamster.
    Sophie K

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