Hello Anna,
I really enjoyed reading this story because of all the great description in it. As well as that, some of the connectives you used were fabulous! However, maybe next time check your work as you made a spelling mistake in the title and a few in your blog. Apart from that minor error everything was great so keep up the good work and carry on blogging.
Hello Anna,
I really enjoyed reading this story because of all the great description in it. As well as that, some of the connectives you used were fabulous! However, maybe next time check your work as you made a spelling mistake in the title and a few in your blog. Apart from that minor error everything was great so keep up the good work and carry on blogging.