Rafi,
I really liked your description for the alien as it included a smilie and a lovely discription of the skin colour, however you missed a full stop and capital letter out. By the way have your parents read this? I’m not sure they’d like you calling them wired but otherwise it was great!
Rafi,
I really liked your description for the alien as it included a smilie and a lovely discription of the skin colour, however you missed a full stop and capital letter out. By the way have your parents read this? I’m not sure they’d like you calling them wired but otherwise it was great!
Hi Rafi,
well done for using wonderfull discriptive writing but next time remember to put a full stop at the end of your work.
I like the desciption on the time but you missed a full stop
Hi Rafi
I like your deskription of the alien.
Remember a space after a full stop.
I love your description. Like Anna W said I’m not sure your parents would like calling them weird. (maybe?)
Sophie K