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Barney, you have explained your thoughts well in this writing. Well done!
You have put in good facts witch were interesting
Sophie K
Ace barney
What do you like about Barney’s work, James?
it was enjoying it was also very clear
That is very interesting barney do you know of any other people carying the torch?
I love this piece of writing because it gave me lots of information and I hope to go to Tottenham!
great facts barney!!!!!!!!
very intresting and full of facts,good paraghraphs by shanice
well done i like’t it it was clear
Wow, I really liked the information you let me in like the 12-year old thats going to hold the torch. I liked how you explained your feelings too! My wish is that you gave me more information about how they light up the torch.
Exellent description and good paragraphs
I hope you liked your writing
I think this is a great blog, it could use more punchuation like this , . ; ‘ – ! ” ( )it really helps