Wow Ida I love your enthusiasm to your writing. I really liked the setting. Can I make some suggestions
1. Put in a title instead of your name
2. Read through your work before you publish it- so that you can organise the layout and so that it makes sense
I love the idea of riding horses on the beach…have you done this before?
Lovely Ida! I wish I had been there sounds like a perfect day and I was able to picture it thanks to your great description! Beach, horses and ice cream! What flavour ice cream did you have?
Ha ha was Neves horse called 007? Was it a secret agent horse? Sounds like a pretty good day to me. Excellent work I really enjoy reading your stories.
Wow Ida I love your enthusiasm to your writing. I really liked the setting. Can I make some suggestions
1. Put in a title instead of your name
2. Read through your work before you publish it- so that you can organise the layout and so that it makes sense
I love the idea of riding horses on the beach…have you done this before?
No I have not ever rided on the beach.I WOULD LOVE TO
Great poem Ida.
Sounds like a lovely day.
Shows you have lots of imagination and lovely ideas.
Expresses your love of horses really well too.
Thanks
Well done Ida that was really great! Which beach was it on? Remember to put more punctuation! Any way still really good!
Lovely Ida! I wish I had been there sounds like a perfect day and I was able to picture it thanks to your great description! Beach, horses and ice cream! What flavour ice cream did you have?
Ha ha was Neves horse called 007? Was it a secret agent horse? Sounds like a pretty good day to me. Excellent work I really enjoy reading your stories.
I like the names of your horses!
Söt liten historia Ida.En vacker dag får du kanske rida på stranden.
Mormor