Wow, Maud!
I love your creative piece. I loved how you set it into a dream (Well, Nightmare) and at the end the person wakes up. Why do you think these jets would’ve gone into the trouble just to bomb a school? Keep Blogging!
Wow Maud, a lovely piece of descriptive writing and great use of the prompt. I really liked that actually it was a dream…it wasn’t obvious to begin with, which is great! Keep up the good work!
Goodness Maud this is a fabulous 100WC. Your use of interesting vocabulary is particulary good and makes yout writing come to likfe. You have clearly spent time thinking about the prompt and as such created a great piece of writing – well done.
Wow, Maud!
I love your creative piece. I loved how you set it into a dream (Well, Nightmare) and at the end the person wakes up. Why do you think these jets would’ve gone into the trouble just to bomb a school? Keep Blogging!
Wow Maud, a lovely piece of descriptive writing and great use of the prompt. I really liked that actually it was a dream…it wasn’t obvious to begin with, which is great! Keep up the good work!
Goodness Maud this is a fabulous 100WC. Your use of interesting vocabulary is particulary good and makes yout writing come to likfe. You have clearly spent time thinking about the prompt and as such created a great piece of writing – well done.