5 sentence challenge

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5 Responses to 5 sentence challenge

  1. Bryn says:

    i found it very creative and it was detaild,i think next time you could maybe think about a bit more puncution

  2. kenan says:

    i liked that you under lined your words and i like the couler because it makes it stand out alot.

  3. casper says:

    short but sweat.

  4. Mrs Hedley says:

    I like how you changed your sentence starters and used connectives.

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