Your opening sentence is wonderful. It immediately invites the curious reader to continue the story. Well done.
With such a dense jungle engulfing you, it would be hard to see what was making any noise. I can only hope the lion is one like Aslan from “The Chronicles of Narnia” otherwise your story might end suddenly. 🙂
Hello Alex,
Your opening sentence is wonderful. It immediately invites the curious reader to continue the story. Well done.
With such a dense jungle engulfing you, it would be hard to see what was making any noise. I can only hope the lion is one like Aslan from “The Chronicles of Narnia” otherwise your story might end suddenly. 🙂
I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia