Wow your writting was really good, but I didn’t under stand some of it
wow beatrix that was an amazing piece of writing .mabey you could cheak your spelling or ask your mum. well done
armelle i agree on you so now I will read it again and again to make shore it makes sence
liala for most of it I did ask my mum but mabey not all of it
That was a really good piece of writing Beatrix and I really liked it. However, I think that (alfal) should be spelled awful. Though I did look it up in a dictionary myself for the correct spelling.
Well done Beatrix!
It was a brilliant piece of writing but occasionally you don’t put a capital letter.
Apart from that this work was fairly good but you wrote some strange things and added a couple of numbers that didn’t fit into the sentence!
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Wow your writting was really good, but I didn’t under stand some of it
wow beatrix that was an amazing piece of writing .mabey you could cheak your spelling or ask your mum.
well done
armelle i agree on you so now I will read it again and again to make shore it makes sence
liala for most of it I did ask my mum but mabey not all of it
That was a really good piece of writing Beatrix and I really liked it. However, I think that (alfal) should be spelled awful. Though I did look it up in a dictionary myself for the correct spelling.
Well done Beatrix!
It was a brilliant piece of writing but occasionally you don’t put a capital letter.
Apart from that this work was fairly good but you wrote some strange things and added a couple of numbers that didn’t fit into the sentence!