I really liked how you put in loads of detail! But I don’t think you put in all the words, check in your writing that you put in BRILLIANT! Over all I really enjoyed it!
Hi Bryn, this is for future reference.
1. Don’t write your name as a title
2. You don’t have to put colour into every sentence
3. We know if you have used the required prompt
4. You need to know this information, you will be blogging for the next 3 years!
Fantastic vocabulary, Bryn. I wanted to keep reading more! Do you think you have only written 5 sentences?
I like the adjectives you have put in. Try next time to make it a tiny bit shorter but apart from that I thought it was brilliant!
I really liked how you put in loads of detail! But I don’t think you put in all the words, check in your writing that you put in BRILLIANT! Over all I really enjoyed it!
Hi Bryn, this is for future reference.
1. Don’t write your name as a title
2. You don’t have to put colour into every sentence
3. We know if you have used the required prompt
4. You need to know this information, you will be blogging for the next 3 years!