5 SENTENCE CHALLENGE

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5 Responses to 5 SENTENCE CHALLENGE

  1. Mrs Hedley says:

    I love your ambitious adjectives. Well done, Barney!

  2. connor says:

    Very good putting in similies describing him as a different person. I wish you could maybe add in a bit more but overall I thought it was very good.

  3. Maddie says:

    I really liked how you put in lots of descriptive words inside like COLLOSAL, EXTREMELY and MAGNIFICENT.

  4. Imogen says:

    That was a very good five sentence challenge and you have used very good adjectives, such as colossal, but when you say large colossal you would normally only use one adjective, either colossal or large.

  5. billy says:

    Hi,Barneylots of good discription words.Ilike bobthe puppy.

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