Wow Laila! This is incredible! I never knew you were such a capable writer. The only improvement I am available to offer is remember to start a new sentence with a capital letter. However you only made that mistake once or twice. Keep up the good work as I can’t wait to read some more of your blogs. 🙂 !
I agree with Rafi, Laila – this is a terrific piece of writing! It is full of really interesting ideas, and you have expressed them so beautifully and clearly – well done. I agree that schools are very precious places – yours sounds like an amazing one!
Wow Laila! This is incredible! I never knew you were such a capable writer. The only improvement I am available to offer is remember to start a new sentence with a capital letter. However you only made that mistake once or twice. Keep up the good work as I can’t wait to read some more of your blogs. 🙂 !
I agree with Rafi, Laila – this is a terrific piece of writing! It is full of really interesting ideas, and you have expressed them so beautifully and clearly – well done. I agree that schools are very precious places – yours sounds like an amazing one!