Very good Alfie!
This poem was alive with action whilst you included some fantastic words. However, you were supposed to put a couple of lines extra in between each part of the poem. Apart from that, everything was fine so keep up the good work and carry on blogging.
Very good Alfie!
This poem was alive with action whilst you included some fantastic words. However, you were supposed to put a couple of lines extra in between each part of the poem. Apart from that, everything was fine so keep up the good work and carry on blogging.