OUCH! That’s my head you’re on top off!

Posted on July 4, 2012 by Deleted User
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1 Response to OUCH! That’s my head you’re on top off!

  1. Rafi says:
    July 7, 2012 at 6:38 am

    Hi Louis,
    WOW! This poem was great as all of the description made it come alive. As well as that, you stuck to the style that Paul Liles wanted you to keep so well done! Maybe next time you can make it either rhyme or make your poems a bit longer. Congratulations on producing a fantastic piece of work.

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