Rafi- this is a great piece of writing indeed! You have built the tension that athletes must feel before a match and then that release that starting must bring. Excellent writing!
This is a great peace of writing. You have really captured the feelings that an athlete must feel before and important race. I love your style and your choice of adjectives.
Rafi- this is a great piece of writing indeed! You have built the tension that athletes must feel before a match and then that release that starting must bring. Excellent writing!
Hello Rafi,
This is a great peace of writing. You have really captured the feelings that an athlete must feel before and important race. I love your style and your choice of adjectives.
Keep it up!
Mrs Travers