Hi Harry,
I thought your poem was very good as you made it rhyme but you also made it fit in with the type/style of poem. Maybe next time, can you put in more description and make it a bit longer. Well done!
Hi Harry,
I thought that that was an amazing poem; however, there area few bits of punctuation you missed, for-instance full stops and commas. I think that was basically the thing you need to improve upon. Otherwise, brilliant!
Hi Harry,
I thought your poem was very good as you made it rhyme but you also made it fit in with the type/style of poem. Maybe next time, can you put in more description and make it a bit longer. Well done!
Hi Harry,
I thought that that was an amazing poem; however, there area few bits of punctuation you missed, for-instance full stops and commas. I think that was basically the thing you need to improve upon. Otherwise, brilliant!