Aaima, this is a terrific 100WC. I love the twist you put at the end — I never expected it and it made me laugh, as I remember my brother’s socks. Ppew! Keep an eye out for run-on sentences, and don’t forget your full stops. Perhaps reading aloud will help you find them. Brava, young author — you have a promising writing career ahead!
Aaima, this is a terrific 100WC. I love the twist you put at the end — I never expected it and it made me laugh, as I remember my brother’s socks. Ppew! Keep an eye out for run-on sentences, and don’t forget your full stops. Perhaps reading aloud will help you find them. Brava, young author — you have a promising writing career ahead!
ilove your story very funny