That was phenominal! Your writing actually corresponded to your title, for it certainly was no ordinary piece of writing either. I have never seen someone write what their flavours or likings of somethings are, it is just not how I usually write. Nice to see someone has changed their style. Loitering is a great word to use, however there is a small mistake where you could have taken out a few words: “I don’t have one favourite, but ‘I have’ 4 favourites”. The part in apostrophes is where you could take out the words. After 4 you could have written ‘different’ or an alternative to ‘different’. Good Work! Hopefully you will get showcased this week, as it is the last 100 word challenge week of the year. I love 100 word challenge!!!
That was phenominal! Your writing actually corresponded to your title, for it certainly was no ordinary piece of writing either. I have never seen someone write what their flavours or likings of somethings are, it is just not how I usually write. Nice to see someone has changed their style. Loitering is a great word to use, however there is a small mistake where you could have taken out a few words: “I don’t have one favourite, but ‘I have’ 4 favourites”. The part in apostrophes is where you could take out the words. After 4 you could have written ‘different’ or an alternative to ‘different’. Good Work! Hopefully you will get showcased this week, as it is the last 100 word challenge week of the year. I love 100 word challenge!!!