Hello Hall I like the imaganitive idia of a super pig I hope you write a sequell however you could try to improve on your capatalisation.
Hi Hal, I really like your story,and I think the first bit is the best bit. And to improve,on the second paragraph you forgot to use a capital I.
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Hello Hall I like the imaganitive idia of a super pig I hope you write a sequell however you could try to improve on your capatalisation.
Hi Hal,
I really like your story,and I think the first bit is the best bit.
And to improve,on the second paragraph you forgot to use a capital I.