That was a really nice peace of work. I liked how at the end you made it a mystery.Do you play the piano? I know I would like to play a musical instrument.Will you write another post about the end of the story ?Maybe you could describe what the piano teacher looks like and how it went.
Hi Dilan
That was a really good peace of work. I really liked how you were all exited about your piano until the day came for your lesson and you got all shy.
from Maddie P
Hi Dilan I really liked the way you said how shy you where but were it said “I had always wanted the play a musical instrument” you should of said to instead.
Hi Dilan,
That was a really nice peace of work. I liked how at the end you made it a mystery.Do you play the piano? I know I would like to play a musical instrument.Will you write another post about the end of the story ?Maybe you could describe what the piano teacher looks like and how it went.
From Ava
Dilan
I like how you described how you was feeling. Next time spell the I’s with capitl letters
Hi Dilan
That was a really good peace of work. I really liked how you were all exited about your piano until the day came for your lesson and you got all shy.
from Maddie P
Hi Dilan I really liked the way you said how shy you where but were it said “I had always wanted the play a musical instrument” you should of said to instead.