My holiday

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4 Responses to My holiday

  1. Lauren says:

    Lola
    You did a lot in your holiday. Well done with your capital letters. You could write a conclusion at the back.
    Great report of your holiday

  2. Sophie K says:

    I really enjoyed reading about your holiday it sounds really fun.
    Very good punctuation.

  3. CLEM says:

    fab icant belive yo went to a theam park.

  4. Ella S says:

    WOW!That sounds amazing.I wish I was there!

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