Very good luaran I realy enjoyed it one of the best poems i have seen, but you wrote sad at one point instead of said but this is amazing!
It is a good story with great punctuation. I can’t think of anything you could inprove great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good luaran I realy enjoyed it one of the best poems i have seen, but you wrote sad at one point instead of said but
this is amazing!
It is a good story with great punctuation. I can’t think of anything you could inprove great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!