Well done Jamie. I love your imagination of the queen be in related. Well done for telling us what you are feeling and doing. Next time remember after a someone talking do another line then someone else talks
Welldone i love how funny it was. Imagine if she really was related to you. Next time put more about Ben I did not understand it when he was out side. Great work !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well done Jamie. I love your imagination of the queen be in related. Well done for telling us what you are feeling and doing. Next time remember after a someone talking do another line then someone else talks
Thanks for the hellp lauren it was verey usfull
Well done I love your imagination about being realated to the queen but when someone else talks do a new line.
I like your blog, imagine being related to the queen, is there a reason you wrote that? Is your Mum related to the queen?
This a very good story , Jamie. I like the way that you use exiting vocabulary.
funny and I liked the whay it was just a dream from hermione
Well done I really like your imagination and your ending for your story. But next time write as a title 100 wc so people know you have done one.
I think this is quite exciting.
Welldone i love how funny it was. Imagine if she really was related to you. Next time put more about Ben I did not understand it when he was out side. Great work !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Jamie
Good decription of your mums feelings next time try and do as space after the fulstop.
but otherwise really good.
Hi Jamie
I wish I was related to the queen.Good decription of your mums feelings.