Very good imaginetive, I really like to hear much more and in my head it sounded spooky getting louder and louder
This is great, Rafi. I really like the descriptive language. Next time you might want to tell me a bit more about the UFO.
That was a verry good piece of wrighting, very imaganative and discriptive. And I wanted to read more.
Good capital letters and full stops. But you have not done a title.
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Very good
imaginetive, I really like to hear much more and in my head it sounded spooky getting louder and louder
This is great, Rafi. I really like the descriptive language. Next time you might want to tell me a bit more about the UFO.
That was a verry good piece of wrighting, very imaganative and discriptive. And I wanted to read more.
Good capital letters and full stops. But you have not done a title.