This is great, Hugo! I really like the theme. Next time you might want to develop the ending a bit.
Great full stops and capitals and a very good story.
Hi Hugo, this is a great piece of work because its quite long and gripping. But who is the man who stole the TSM3000? Great describing and very funny!
From Luca 🙂
your work was brilliant I liked your amaginachion
Hugo I loved the idea and the words were totally uniriganal. your blog was a Y6 standard. WELL DONE
WOW! Such a powerful piece of writing. It was really funny too and I throughly enjoyed it. Great use of punctuation.
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This is great, Hugo! I really like the theme. Next time you might want to develop the ending a bit.
Great full stops and capitals and a very good story.
Hi Hugo,
this is a great piece of work because its quite long and gripping. But who is the man who stole the TSM3000?
Great describing and very funny!
From Luca 🙂
your work was brilliant I liked your amaginachion
Hugo
I loved the idea and the words were totally uniriganal.
your blog was a Y6 standard. WELL DONE
WOW! Such a powerful piece of writing. It was really funny too and I throughly enjoyed it.
Great use of punctuation.