Hi Dilan, I liked the story about how you were scared ,next time go through your work and make sure it makes sense.
can you also check your spelling and remember capital letters. This is how you spell practiced.
Hi Dilan
That was a very nice piece of work! I liked the way you explained that you were scared at the beginning but then
you felt more reassured at the end. I love playing my piano and I hope that if you play it you will also like it to!
That was a really nice piece of work. I liked how you were saying you never wished you had wanted a piano lesson. The thing you could improve on is your capital letters and maybe you could have had a better ending.
Hi Dilan, I liked the story about how you were scared ,next time go through your work and make sure it makes sense.
can you also check your spelling and remember capital letters. This is how you spell practiced.
Hi Dilan
That was a very nice piece of work! I liked the way you explained that you were scared at the beginning but then
you felt more reassured at the end. I love playing my piano and I hope that if you play it you will also like it to!
Hi Dilan,
That was a really nice piece of work. I liked how you were saying you never wished you had wanted a piano lesson. The thing you could improve on is your capital letters and maybe you could have had a better ending.
From Ava