Hi Maddie M like you story i really liked when you said it
rolledthrew the garden door but here was a little spelling bit
that was wrong when you said your mum hade go one on
holiday you had said go on holiday.But it was a really good story.
Lotte
Hi Maddie M
I realy liked your post it was funny and enjoyeble it was nice that you ware righting about animals and looking after them.You could have corrected spelling and punctuation.
Eve
Hi Maddie,
I realy like your piece of work because it has good discription on the fox cub but next time use connectives to make the sentence longer. Why did you name the fox cub anna?
Hi Maddie I love your use of descriptive writing like ginger fur and I love your punctuation and I would love to have a pet fox myself I loved how you said screamed. From Ella.
Hi Maddie M like you story i really liked when you said it
rolledthrew the garden door but here was a little spelling bit
that was wrong when you said your mum hade go one on
holiday you had said go on holiday.But it was a really good story.
Lotte
Hi Maddie M
I realy liked your post it was funny and enjoyeble it was nice that you ware righting about animals and looking after them.You could have corrected spelling and punctuation.
Eve
Hi Maddie,
I realy like your piece of work because it has good discription on the fox cub but next time use connectives to make the sentence longer. Why did you name the fox cub anna?
Hi Maddie I love your use of descriptive writing like ginger fur and I love your punctuation and I would love to have a pet fox myself I loved how you said screamed. From Ella.