That story made me want to read on. Briliant descriptions and adjectives. You described every thing sos well I compleatly knew what was going on. Well done you created a briliant piece of wrighting
Hi Gabby
This is the type of story I want to read it had it all the adjectives similes description everything I would happily read on and I wish there was more great effort great work well done Gabby.
Thanks Mxx
love the description about the robber and the ending .
That story made me want to read on. Briliant descriptions and adjectives. You described every thing sos well I compleatly knew what was going on. Well done you created a briliant piece of wrighting
Hi Gabby
This is the type of story I want to read it had it all the adjectives similes description everything I would happily read on and I wish there was more great effort great work well done Gabby.
Thanks Mxx