Hi Louis I like your imagination and description on the statue however it was a bit over the top when the kid got shot.
Hi Louis,
That was a really inventive story because you turned a really boring piece about statue into zap and security guards. It was really good but maybe you could improve on your grammar, such as including capital letters and full stops.
Did you make your flight? Well done!
From Ava
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Hi Louis
I like your imagination and description on the statue however it was a bit over the top when the kid got shot.
Hi Louis,
That was a really inventive story because you turned a really boring piece about statue into zap and security guards. It was really good but maybe you could improve on your grammar, such as including capital letters and full stops.
Did you make your flight? Well done!
From Ava