Hi Lotte, well done for completing the 100 word challenge. Well done for looking closely at the structure and seeing all the items it is made from. By including lots of different pieces of information about the structure you helped the reader (me) understand what I was reading about in more detail, helping me imagine what the 50 metre high structure would look like.
I also believe that people like to look at what others have done to get inspiration and help their own imaginations, you can do that too by reading the other 100 wc entries. Maybe next time read back through your sentences and check they all have capital letters and full stops. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.
Hi Lotte, well done for completing the 100 word challenge. Well done for looking closely at the structure and seeing all the items it is made from. By including lots of different pieces of information about the structure you helped the reader (me) understand what I was reading about in more detail, helping me imagine what the 50 metre high structure would look like.
I also believe that people like to look at what others have done to get inspiration and help their own imaginations, you can do that too by reading the other 100 wc entries. Maybe next time read back through your sentences and check they all have capital letters and full stops. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.