Hi Daniel!
Your 100WC was very scary this week and sounded like something that Doctor Who might have to help with! I really liked your descriptive words, you just need to have a look at a couple of sentences as you have forgotten a couple of capital letters.
Thank you for taking part in this week’s 100 Word Challenge!
* You have varied the opening to your sentences to keep the reader interested!
* You have kept the reader’s interest with interesting words like “meteors”
* You have used your imagination superbly!
W: Make sure you read your work through for missing capitals and punctuation!
Hi Daniel!
Your 100WC was very scary this week and sounded like something that Doctor Who might have to help with! I really liked your descriptive words, you just need to have a look at a couple of sentences as you have forgotten a couple of capital letters.
Well done!
Hi Daniel,
Thank you for taking part in this week’s 100 Word Challenge!
* You have varied the opening to your sentences to keep the reader interested!
* You have kept the reader’s interest with interesting words like “meteors”
* You have used your imagination superbly!
W: Make sure you read your work through for missing capitals and punctuation!
Hope to see you next week,
Miss Windsor (Team 100WC)