WOW Daivd outstanding work you should be proud with a mind like yours at the work you have done i saw this on the 100WC website and i am looking forward at the next writing on 100WC from Candice p.s. check out my webiste http://altony6.schoolblogs.org/tag/candice/
WOW Daivd outstanding work you should be proud with a mind like yours at the work you have done i saw this on the 100WC website and i am looking forward at the next writing on 100WC from Candice p.s. check out my webiste http://altony6.schoolblogs.org/tag/candice/
Hi David,
A really imaginative piece of writing! I really like the way you build up the tension.
Next time check for accidental commas.