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2 Responses to dream

1. IsabellaI says:

   October 16, 2012 at 5:48 pm

   Hi Cleo.
   Great! Very imaginative story – next time don’t put ‘and’ after a comma.
   Why was the window bashed open?
2. Amanda Wilson (Team 100WC) says:

   October 17, 2012 at 9:36 am

   Hi Cleo,

   I like some of the vocabulary you’ve used in your story: ’strolled upstairs,’ ‘massive crash.’

   Remember to include the correct punctuation after speech marks.

   Well done

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