Emerald City Description

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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One Response to Emerald City Description

  1. Sam C says:
    October 17, 2012 at 4:21 pm

    Hi Alex,

    I really like your way of saying “star-spangled emeralds” instead of emeralds.
    Your ending is really good too but the Scarecrow’s speech doesn’t need a comma in it.

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