The wonderfull emerald city

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The wonderfull emerald city

  1. Sam G says:
    October 18, 2012 at 4:07 pm

    Great use of speech marks. Maybe next time don’t be afraid to use some full stops.

  2. matthew goodall says:
    October 21, 2012 at 6:28 pm

    very good Alfie good simile and speech marks,but you need to put two speech marks when one one person speaks strait after another and full stops please.

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