Hi Lauren, Wow! I was compleatly blown away by that amazing piece of writing! I loved it! You used exelent descriptions that really painted a picture in my mind. Well done!
Thankyou Gabriella because that made me feel really proud of my work I will try and keep it up
Hi Lauren,
I like your story beacause it’s very descriptive and it’s like that the whole way throughout the story!
Very descriptive and awesome metaphors,personification and other figurative stuff,more comas please!
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Hi Lauren,
Wow! I was compleatly blown away by that amazing
piece of writing! I loved it! You used exelent descriptions
that really painted a picture in my mind.
Well done!
Thankyou Gabriella because that made me feel really proud of my work
I will try and keep it up
Hi Lauren,
I like your story beacause it’s very descriptive and it’s like that the whole way throughout the story!
Very descriptive and awesome metaphors,personification and other figurative stuff,more comas please!