Emrald city

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to Emrald city

  1. Hugo says:
    October 15, 2012 at 9:18 am

    I think you have described the taste of the sweets very well with good adjectives.

    My only improvement is some of the speelings are incorrect.

  2. Sidali says:
    October 15, 2012 at 9:20 am

    I agree with Hugo.

  3. Ella S says:
    October 21, 2012 at 6:26 pm

    Hi Theo,
    I do agree with the boys some of your spellings are not right, but you did a very good peas of work!

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