I loved the adjectives, e.g deep ivy couloured, glowing green, smooth yellow and sweet fizzy. The personification was great and you put everything you learned about fuguritive language and put it down on your sheet. Their is a few spelling mistakes can you find it?
Hi Gabby
Great work lots of personification backed up by lots of nice adjectives and atmosphere description.I feel this is a strong piece of work but i can find some spelling mistakes well done keep up the good work.
Mxx
I loved the adjectives, e.g deep ivy couloured, glowing green, smooth yellow and sweet fizzy. The personification was great and you put everything you learned about fuguritive language and put it down on your sheet. Their is a few spelling mistakes can you find it?
Gabriella, such amazing use of words, it made me hungry for more!!!!
Hi Gabby
Great work lots of personification backed up by lots of nice adjectives and atmosphere description.I feel this is a strong piece of work but i can find some spelling mistakes well done keep up the good work.
Mxx