I really like your blog using figurative language, next time leave spaces after commas.
Hi Sid, I really liked your story because you used some great words like:Dazzling, leafy green and words like that. To improve you might want to check your work because you accidently wrote Tototo.
Eusebi
Very good description my only improvement is that some of it dose not make sense.
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I really like your blog using figurative language, next time leave spaces after commas.
Hi Sid,
I really liked your story because you used some great words like:Dazzling, leafy green and words like that.
To improve you might want to check your work because you accidently wrote Tototo.
Eusebi
Very good description my only improvement is that some of it dose not make sense.