The Emerald City

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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6 Responses to The Emerald City

  1. nathalie says:
    October 17, 2012 at 5:41 pm

    Well done Holly, you put in fab descriptions in. My only improvement is that you should include more other areas of figuarative language.

  2. Alfie B says:
    October 18, 2012 at 3:48 pm

    WOW!
    I bet l Frank balm would replace this any day because this is professorial!
    Hope to see your next blog!

  3. Maddie m says:
    October 19, 2012 at 7:44 am

    Hi Holly
    I really like your description it’s great. I like the way you did not just do 1 paragraph
    From Maddie

  4. Lola says:
    October 19, 2012 at 4:10 pm

    Well done Holly! I loved your use of personification and metaphors!!!!

  5. Matthew says:
    October 21, 2012 at 4:18 pm

    Hi holly,

    Very nice personification and awesome description.

  6. Ella S says:
    October 21, 2012 at 6:15 pm

    Hi Holly,
    great description and I cant wait for more!

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