Hi Alex, I realy think you have put in brilliant discription of the emrald city. Next time remember to not just only put discription into your writing, but also to use your five sences and mayby add in some similes. well done, Rosie
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Hi Alex,
I realy think you have put in brilliant discription of the emrald city. Next time remember to not just only put discription into your writing, but also to use your five sences and mayby add in some similes.
well done,
Rosie